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Eric Zarathos [Done]
DOSSIER: DEMON
”Oh, no tears please. It's a waste of good suffering!”
BASIC DETAILS
”Oh, no tears please. It's a waste of good suffering!”
BASIC DETAILS
NAME:
Eric Zarathos
ALIASES:
The Demon of Violence, Demon Innovator or Violence, Zenotic Amon, Zen, Christopher, Chris, Chris-san, Eric-San
AGE:
1,210 years ago
APPARENT GENDER:
Male
HOMESPHERE:
"N/A."
PICTURE: DEMON:
- Spoiler:
PICTURE: MORTAL:
- Spoiler:
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PERSONAL DETAILS
DEMON DESCRIPTION:
Eric's body undergoes a drastic transformation. His hair becomes white, his skin colour changes to slate grey; the skin on the entire right side of his body becomes scaly, on his back, ten protrusions appear (five on the upper body and five near his hips) as well as a black unique pattern of magatama on his back; one large one, with a black Demonic-like pattern within it, on his mid-back, and nine smaller ones, arranged in rows of three, below it. In addition, the entire right half of his body has acquired a unique black, scale-like pattern across it, replacing the scars he acquired as once before, including repairing all the wounds inflicted on him. The ten protrusions on his back now form the collar and coattails of a haori. Two horns also sprout from his forehead; the left smaller than the right. Additionally, he gains six magatama markings across his chest
MORTAL DESCRIPTION:
With his mortal form, Eric has been known to have different kinds of hairstyles always going to a barber shop to find the perfect look. However, He enjoys having a black spiky hair looks convincing himself it more into human this his demonic form. Yet the guy wears a spiral shaped mask to hide his face. He has normal male height of 175.0 cm and normal human weight of 55.9 kg. He had something of an human ninja attire. attire includes a pair of black pants and gloves, with a white, presumed form-fitting shirt underneath. Over this he wears a purple, high-collared, long sleeve mantle that splits down the lower half and has the symbol crest on the back. Around his waist he wears a simple, light-purple obi and a belt. Strapped to his back, he carried a purple gunbai with black trimmings and black tomoe, connected to a black chain that ran up his right sleeve
PERSONALITY:
Zenotic Amon was an extremely ruthless demon who has little regard for the lives of others. Having very few redeemable qualities, Hagokumo relishes in killing and, to him, there is nothing more important or honorable than battle. He is quite self-assured and confident in his own battle prowess. When a demon punches Eric during their fight, He was deadly furious, since it is the first time he has been hit in the face before. This seems to be very insulting for him, and he claims that it will never happen again. Despite his formidable skill, Zenotic Amon still desires more power so that he can become the most formidable demon on the battlefield, which motivates him to train harder and collect things to aid him. As he becomes stronger, Zenotic Amon delights more and more in senseless slaughter, wiping out entire armies of helpless warriors for no better reason than the fact that he enjoys the sport of it. He is completely merciless and kills without remorse. Zenotic Amon even demonstrates an affinity for evil in general. Zenotic Amon holds humans in little esteem and, like many demons, has little or more respect for half-demons or full fledge demons. However, he has a keen respect for those who can match him on the battlefield, and as such grants a demon some recognition due to the latter's strength. Besides fighting, Eric has also demonstrated a healthy appetite for other pursuits, namely women. Eric also has casual relationships with demon women. Zenotic Amom has performed many amazing feats due to his superior physique. Despite all the hellish difficulties and blood trauma, Eric has been shown never to back down, even in the most overwhelming circumstances. Eric's drive and pure motivation have allowed him to press through situations that would seem impossible.
Now something has completely change him after the brain merging, Eric has more intelligence sense and still had his demonic evil lifestyle. He doesn't kill people as much anymore things have happen to him really made him more neutral then evil. He is somewhat more calm and collective around people but the guy shows more of an serious attitude something to do with the human memories combined with him. Throughout time, Eric started becoming more confident in his abilities enjoying the thrill of fighting against strong & powerful opponents. Seeking blood, pain and respect with each encounter, he constantly journeys in order to improve himself. After some business deals, Zenotic Amon started understanding humans more and how a human lives within this realm now really the demon is neutral-evil trying to do things his way. He often avoids responsibility for the influence he has over others, claiming those he coerced and manipulated had followed him willingly. He is also capable of great patience in attaining his goals which he hates doing but things have changed completely within his demonic mind.
HISTORY:
Eric Zarathos a.k.a Zenotic Amon was the 114th demon created from the Necronomicon Ex Mortis he was told to be the most dangerous when summoned. The Necronomicon Ex-Mortis stated if this demon was ever summoned that he would kill instantly in the hearts of evil men many would use the demon for their bidding. Many demons used the summoned demon for personal gain if its was for money or power the demon was given instructions and their were follow. The summoned demon's appetite for blood and destruction was unspeakable and unbelievable the things he to humans even demon hunters did would make a demon proud. During battles, Eric wonders what his true purpose was and he always wonder while serving under various masters of the Necronomicon. It was a endless he would be summoned, told what to do, the task would be completed and he would be summoned right back within the book. Within a spiritual nexus, Eric started training himself with the various demon magics making himself stronger for future. From the other demons, Eric started learning many demon abilities and demon techniques even improving his own powers. He earns a new title from the Necronomicon itself naming him "demon summoner" and he was proud to have it too. Yet something violent happen with a unknown group of demon hunters, Haggis a witch demon thought that the demon was too powerful to stop and the witch's council conjure up a Judas removal spell removing the summon demon's text from the Necronomicon. Eric started to dissapear as his skin started to dissolve and his voice was being torn apart and he started to fade within the air. By all means, Eric ceased to exist but the demon summoner wasn't forgotten. As for the Necronomicon, the book was passed down over the long decades yet no one knows what truly happen to the book. It was later stated a powerful warrior took the book for himself....Anyway, Eric was floating around the some unknown dimension only pieces of his body remain and his mind completely shredded. By all accounts, Eric was nothing but a junk load of body parts floating within a wavy dimension but something happen within the dimension. A black light started flashing upon his body parts it was putting him back together but on the down side it was tearing through his flesh. Eric was alive again...
The demon got re-created from an ancient demon spell from a different spellbook, Zenotic Amon was revived with demon energy but his body wasn't completed the person who conjure the spell didn't finish it. Whoever did it must have shit a brick and took the fuck off leaving the demon uncompleted. The demon was a bloody mess it looked like his demon was put on backwards, he asked for help but he grabbed a homeless human. The demon started absorbing the human getting some of his flesh back every time he touched the human. The process started off slowly but his facial features were back and that was it, Eric needed more. After killing a few more humans, Eric got his body back yet he started looking at the book which brought him back to life. He ate the book which the magic book infused with his tongue creating a tribal black tattoo which gave him ancient magic powers and demon abilities. Zenotic Amon wasn't a slave to the Necronomicon Ex-Mortis anymore and the worse part the demon was on Earth.
But something happen it his body it was turning ghost-like, Zarathos then remembered no demon can't enter the mortal realm without a body. However, Zarathos started floating around until the demon found a perfect body to jump into it took a while to take control after a mind struggle with the human. Eric found out that this human was named Christopher Seiger and that he was almost killed by an fallen angel wanting revenge for what happen to his brother or something. Everything seemed to be alright, Eric finally had complete control until both human's brain and demon's brain merged into one and the demon started seeing images of a past life. From the merge, Eric now had human intelligence and some form of compassion. The demon started slowly to rise within the mortal realm gaining a better understanding of how these mortals work so that he can plan deadly things for the future. Through studying withiin libraries, Eric started increasing his knowledge and many of his demonic abilities improving them by studying different styles of combat it seemed pointless but the demon wanted to be better. It took years to study many new abilities but the demon of violence thought no matter what it would take the demon would learn them from human knowledge. Conflicting memories were a bitch at times, Eric really couldn't really focus on evil things as much but the demon focused himself to move on with his new body.
After finding out his human host's identity, Eric started traveling around the world discovering new things about the mortal realm which he enjoyed. After eight years of learning different lifestyles and fighting techniques, Eric returned to United States planning to make these lands his personal stomping grounds. Finally, Eric had a final confrontation with the human that he joined with Christoper Seiger defeating the human one last time within his mind. Before locking the human up forever in null darkness, Eric said "We shall meet again before the conclusion of this drama. Then you will learn of the new demon history... I will write for this world."
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FACTION:
Freelance
SKILLS:
Enhanced Demon Strength: Eric is stronger than the average demon, his short size allowing him to pick up demons the size of humans with one hand or throwing large boulders and picking up trees.
Demon Senses: The demon has acute senses that are comparable to those of some animals. He can see at some distances, with god clarity, than an ordinary human. He is able to recognize some people and objects by scent, even if they are well hidden. He can track a target by scent or sight, even if the scent has been greatly eroded by time and weather factors, with some success.
Demonic Healing: The demon has an demonic healing process that enables him to regenerate damaged or destroyed tissue with far greater efficiency than an ordinary human. He can regenerate damaged or destroyed tissue & body parts taking some hours to heal because the demon hasn't fully mastered the healing skill yet. It still in the beginner stage which his healing is somewhat accelerated.
Demonic Reflexes: Eric's reflexes are enhanced to levels that are 30% the natural physical limits of the finest human athlete.
Demonic Skilled Fighter: Zenotic Amon has been classified as a trained fighter, though the specific fighting arts he has learned have never been revealed. Presumably, as a trained warrior, he is skilled in some ninjutsu techniques such as Taijutsu. Zen is also very well trained in the use of some weapons. stealth methods, silent movement and evasion/escape methods. Still the demon has learned a few skills, Eric stills has problems trying to understand them but he uses his learned fighting skills to survive.
Demonic Arthropod Connection: Eric has an demonic method of creating a psychic alignment with his environment, specifically a more empathic and sympathetic relationship with spiders and insects. While connected to the varying populations of spiders he's able to communicate with them directly or command them.
Enhanced Demon Endurance: Even through his demon strength is strong his endurance levels are stronger as well yet he shown to have some battle scars and wounds so it isn't that invincible yet. Throughtout the battlefield, Eric has shown to have high levels of resistant of damage when fighting due to the fact. He used both willpower and skill in a fight. The sonuvabitch can be killed by too many attacks from an powerful enemy.
WEAKNESSES:
Angels: The opposite of demons their attacks can be damaging to a demon. Their attacks can greatly weaken the demon of violence by 55% yet it would take a while to regain any sorts of fatigue to pain their might cause. Because of the power of their light and the ancient legend that comes that the light will overcome the darkness and that really pisses the demon off. Because of his angelic hatred, he can't enter churches like a normal human would anymore the demon would go berserk tearing though his flesh to find a way out of the church. Another is that he can't drink fruit punch anymore the demon mistakes this for blood making the host spit it out. For some reason, Eric hates the stuff. A church cross can actually burn him but it would have to embedded Jesus cross any other cross would just a little shockwave to his skin.
Heart: This is probably one of the easiest to achieve. This involves, simply, a weapon going straight through his heart. If it is a bit off to the side, it will not count. If the shot manages to pierce the heart, however, it will send a massive shock of pain throughout his body and most likely make him cough up blood. However, if it was done he would still feel the pain; but due to his massive amount of pain tolerance. He doesn't worry about it too much.
Human Memories: From the human merge, Eric had some of the human's memories which are a pain to him really the demon doesn't want them at all. It seems the human that he took over was too much of an saint. The thoughts of the human really cloud up the demon's judgement at times makin him actually think about what he's doing and if he really wants to do. Originally, Eric would just kill and ask questions later but now with these human memories most of the time the demon gets confused. He hopes to one day control these memories and use them to his advantage instead of them being an disadvantage to his demonic brain. They seemed to be at their strongest on Thursdays screwing up the demonic evil judgement making him have a change of heart. Also his demon form looks a little bit like his human form which is Christopher's memories to blame to this.
Temporary Vampire Weaknesses: After abosrbing the anicent book. Eric started noticing a bunch of things which were wrong with it body. For a strange reason yet it happen every third of month which the demon same weaknesses if an vampire. But only two of them affect him, Eric doesn't know why the demon has these weaknesses but it only two of them. Eric can't stand garlic and then the ravage smell can actually burn his demonic nose but his demonic senses will be messed up and he won't be able to sense anything. Another thing is sunlight but it isn't enough to kill him like a normal vampire but sunlight can weaken his powers. because of the sun's UV rays weaken the demon skin.
COLOURS:
Dark Red - Demonic
Blue - English
Purple - French
Orange - Japanese
TRIVIA:
- During his human lifetime, Eric has amass a large bank account from the many people bank accounts the demon has hacked due to some human friends. Because the hacking can't be trace back to him and police investigations concluded The demon is now a rich person hoping to use the sin of greed to his advantage.
- Eric has two problems in his life which the demon might need help but the guy doesn't know how to ask. Gambling being the first part going to some place around Las Vegas and gamble his money into the damn machines and the blackjack table. The second one is Alcohol the demon has a certain love to Jack Daniels and different kinds of beer not being able to focus straight while drinking.
- Being the last of his kind to be summoned by the Necronomicon Ex-Mortis. Shockingly enough the demon's previous weaknesses were destroyed along to demonic text containing his name, his powers and his former weaknesses can could hurt him. But no more....
- Eric because of his separation of the Necronomicon Ex-Mortis; he's now a demon of violence really a demon who craves violence and blood almost like a crazed vampire. Like the sin of wrath takes the demon over allowing him to unbelievable stuff and amazing feats unlike a normal demon.
- He's a rich demon with a superb back acct.
- He loves eating food (His true love is pizza and things from the meat group)
- He's a demon with augmented abilities because of his devouring of an ancient books making him stronger to some demons and some angels. But ultimately strong to humans...
- He does love female vampires and some animals for an unknown reason that the demon can really understand. He really wish to have a relationship with a female vampire the demon wouldn't care if she needed his blood to survive. His reasons for loving animals is because some of them have a certain rage within them that can be control if trained properly,
- Silver Disorder: Silver tends to have a stronger effect. Their skin is sensitive to it and if cut with it then the wound will take much longer to heal and burn much worse. The silver also causes burns to their skin depending on how sensitive they are to it. It can cause bad burns on some, and mild irritations with others.
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USER DETAILS
ALIAS:
Eric-san
OTHER CHARACTERS:
List ‘em.
ROLEPLAY HISTORY:
3-4 years
FACECLAIM:
Demon -
- Code:
[b]NARUTO[/b] :: [b]OBITO'S JINCHURIKI JUUBI[/b]
- Code:
[b]NARUTO[/b] :: [b]OBITO UCHIHA[/b]
CUSTOM RANK:
Demon Innovator of Violence
Last edited by Eric Zarathos on Thu Sep 26, 2013 9:32 am; edited 6 times in total
Eric Zarathos- DEMON INNOVATOR OF VIOLENCE
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Join date : 2013-09-22
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Power Level: 1
Character Faction: Freelance
Player: Eric-san
Re: Eric Zarathos [Done]
REVISE
Hokay, so I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but I am going to be brutally honest. You are basically going to have to rewrite the app.
1. Homesphere: Edit it to say None or N/A
2. Demon Appearance description is 19 words short.
Personality:
3. So it sounds like he's a demon trying to live as a human? But Demon's don't have their own mortal shell on Earth. They have to possess a person in order to walk on the mortal plane. Maybe talk more about how he was when he was alive as a human before dying and becoming a demon? I'm not sure how you would want to pursue adjusting your app. Like when he was a human he was this giant douche, and then he became a nicer demon or something. Again, up to you.
History:
4. To tie in with #3, you're going to want to adjust your history. Because the whole summoning demon thing is fine? But that would be a group of ritualists summoning a demon. Which means he would be possessing one of the people who summoned him. You could also just make him a Ritualist with the demon inside of him instead? Or you could just have an NPC Ritualist that Eric is inside of (not that he would necessarily be in charge of the body but observing whatever the NPC is doing unless in Inferis when he actually has his own form).
5. So you may want to change the part with the "Nephilim Wars" considering there is a group of Demon Hunters called Nephilim and they were JUST created and they haven't been in any wars.
Skills: On the whole, I would tone some of these down to single skills he can do as opposed to generalizations. Because if we stick to generalizations, then he's sounding way too overpowered.
6. Augmented Super Strength: So you say "He able to do a number of things which a normal demon wouldn't do." You're going to have to be specific because there are a lot of different demons with a lot of things that they can do. Can you list any particular examples of what makes him different from them aside from just saying "other things?"
7. Unique Hand to Hand Combat: You specifically list him knowing wrestling, boxing and kickboxing yet he knows pressure points and nerve locations? How would he know those? Because those locations aren't taught in those particular styles of fighting, they aren't martial arts. Did he learn martial arts along the way? And then please specify what he's learned to "affect his nervous system and cause other physical affects to benefit himself in battle." How did he learn them? What are they? Just some questions along those lines to think about and answer.
8. Augmented Speed: So he….. teleports? how have his skills been augmented to allow for this "super speed?" And I'm guessing you mean Archdemons when you say "superdemons."
Weaknesses:
9. Heart: "out of turn in the ten step process." What 10 step process? What "Many lives?" You don't get more than one life.
Trivia:
10. "Last of the demon sorcerers" would be a Ritualist. Demons cannot summon themselves.
I'm happy to work with you to make your character work. You've got elements in there that would lead to an awesome character, but the app needs a major overhaul.
Jinhong Jangmi- RED ROSE
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Player: Vi
Re: Eric Zarathos [Done]
Ok I've refixed it
Eric Zarathos- DEMON INNOVATOR OF VIOLENCE
- Posts : 5
Join date : 2013-09-22
Case File
Power Level: 1
Character Faction: Freelance
Player: Eric-san
Re: Eric Zarathos [Done]
Hokay so:
You're stepping in the right direction, just needs more work!
- So the Nephilim weren't around when he was first summoned by the Necronomicon. You could say it was just some unnamed group of Demon Hunters or something if you want, but the Nephilim were not around. In the website timeline, they were created two months ago. Not over a thousand years.
- He cannot merge with a dead body. Demons cannot possess dead bodies. He could possess a live person and basically be a master puppeteer of that person, or just have a weak-willed human, but he has to possess a person that is alive. So maybe just have Christopher Seiger be alive instead of dead?
Skills: - He's still too powerful at level 1 with all of these skills. I realize he's supposed to be this amazing demon of destruction, but at the same time he's only level 1 to start with. Leave some room to build up with! Trust me, it will be far more fun to play and interact with people. :) You have to cut down on all of his abilities.
Weaknesses: - Heart: Hold on, what regenerative powers? You do not list anywhere that he has those abilities.
- Vampire weaknesses: Why would he get this random weakness? Is it just a thing that he has, or is there an actual reason?
History:
You're stepping in the right direction, just needs more work!
Jinhong Jangmi- RED ROSE
(Admin) - Posts : 111
Join date : 2013-04-20
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Power Level: 2
Character Faction: Nephilim
Player: Vi
Re: Eric Zarathos [Done]
Done
But he won't be interacting with anybody anytime soon...I have a lot solo work to do......Not right now if he's at Level 1??? Then I can't interact with anybody right now my demon needs training alone....
But he won't be interacting with anybody anytime soon...I have a lot solo work to do......Not right now if he's at Level 1??? Then I can't interact with anybody right now my demon needs training alone....
Eric Zarathos- DEMON INNOVATOR OF VIOLENCE
- Posts : 5
Join date : 2013-09-22
Case File
Power Level: 1
Character Faction: Freelance
Player: Eric-san
Re: Eric Zarathos [Done]
APPROVED
Try finding people for him to train with because one of the rules of the site is no solo-rping. You could write some journal entries for him too! There's always someone willing to do a thread :) Also don't forget to write a demon apparatus profile too!
Jinhong Jangmi- RED ROSE
(Admin) - Posts : 111
Join date : 2013-04-20
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Power Level: 2
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Player: Vi
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