Aloura Reglas

[Aloura Reglas]

DOSSIER: DEMON HUNTER

 
”the demons of this world aren't in hell, they are in the souls of the corrupt”

BASIC DETAILS

NAME:
Aloura Reglas

AGE:
18

GENDER:
Female

NATIONALITY:
American (United States of America)

BIRTHPLACE:
Juarez, Mexico (both parents are American, it was bad timing.)

BIRTHDATE:
August/8/1993

PICTURE:

Spoiler:

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PERSONAL DETAILS

DESCRIPTION:
Aloura is a fairly average height for a girl of her age, standing high at 5 foot 6, 5 foot 8 with her shows on. She wears a long sleeved jacket which is zipped all the way to the top, and strapped at the top, covering her whole neck. Its a dark blue, almost black jacket which has a long white stripe around the sipper, aka the center, and on the shoulders of her jacket. The zipper is an inch wide circle with a white cross in the middle,  and is usually zipped to the top. The shoulders of the uniform are decorated with large white crosses, and a silver broach given to her by her mother rests over her heart. The jacket fills out her C-cupped breasts almost perfectly, getting almost skin tight. The jacket reaches down to the tips of Alouras fingers, with a thin white line running down the sleeve till it reaches the thick white trimming.

She wears a short  black skirt which only goes down to about 6 or 7 inches below the waist, and is trimmed with white. A blue back cover from her waist and goes about 10 or 11 inches down from the waist, and trails behind her as she runs. She wears long, black boots which start right above the knee, and are pure black.

Aloura's hair is constantly a different color. Due to a habit she developed just to piss off her parents when she was younger, she constantly dyes her hair, however, her hair is usually either black, dark green, or dark blue. It will never be a light color, or a red. She isn't a fan of the color red. She has dark, stunning blue eyes, which almost never change colors.

PERSONALITY:
Aloura is a fairly complex individual. She tries her hardest to over, or at least respect, everyone. Her superiors, even her equals are all treated with the up most respect. She has no opinions towards Templar and actually views them as good people who deserve just as much respect as Demon hunters. However, she isn't a fan that that Templars tend to be more popular then demon hunters, and are often treated with more respect. She views this fact as a load of bull.

She never cusses, except for the word Bastard which she only uses when overly enraged. However, she rarely gets to that point because when ever someone pokes fun at her, her low confidence kicks in and it causes her to lose hope in winning. However, when she has a team, she works better. She remembers how they rely on her, and she remembers that she must keep fighting for her friends and her team. Her friends are the most important thing to her, her mother and father being dead her friends are really the only people she has left.

She will usually try her hardest to stick away from violence, unless its with a demon. Contrary to her opinions towards fighting and battles, which are she hates them and tries to use words to avoid it, when facing a demon she knows that she must get over that fact, and go towards the opponent with full force.

Aloura is a very logical person, and knows when and where things must be done. this makes her very good at leading a group, especially when the opponent is far greater then she is. She tries to keep an up beat attitude, but with depression flowing through her body, it is hard for her to keep such an attitude. She will often lose her focus due to such a thing, and consider suicide. However, again, she thinks of all the people she will be letting down in order to keep going. She will use the thoughts of those who have died before, and she knows it would be a disgrace to not only her family, but demons hunters everywhere if she died by her own hand.

HISTORY:
As Aloura was born, it would be very hard for anyone to dispute that her life was anything but perfect. Her family was the richest, almost in the world. Her father being a quite good business man, and her mother being a big time lawyer, she was happy. Aloura went to school, and she even skipped 3rd and fourth grade. At the age of 16 she was in collage. However. the sad fact of life is that it didn't last. Through out all of school, she had very little friends due to her being younger then anyone. This brought to a bit of depression, but it was very manageable and she kept it to her self. However, when Aloura was 16, barely done with her first year of collage, it happened. She came home from the weekend and almost broke down crying. There was a man over her parents bodies, not only with there blood on his clothing, but there limbs in his mouth. As she screamed in shock she tried to get away, throwing what ever she could towards the beast. Running away, she thought was a good idea, she tripped. As she looked up, it happened. it slowly hit her. thoughts of suicide filled her head. "I would rather kill my self then be killed by this thing..." she muttered to herself, then she heard it. The subtle sound of a body hitting the ground. Opening her eyes, she realized the man was on the ground. She looked around, and she saw an image walking away.

To this day she didn't know who it was that saved her, however, with three dead bodies she knew enough to know that she would be blamed for the murders. She backed a tiny back pack and left the whole life she knew behind. She had her fathers credit card in one pocket, and her mothers broach in another. She didn't dare put it on yet. However, she then realized what had happened that day. As she was walking around, staying in a near by hotel. It was only a few days later and she was still in depression. She punched the mirror in front of her and lifted the glass to her wrist. She told her self how useless she was, and right as she plunged it down, something happened. As she dropped the glass, she realized she was no longer in
the back room with the broken mirror. As she looked around, she saw something. Demons. It then hit her. A demon was what killed her parents. She didn't want to, but she let out a scream of shear terror as the demons spotted. "Not again." she screamed to herself as she continued running. She then saw it happen all over again. Someone came down, and killed the demon. As she turned around, she saw what had happened. A man had killed the giant beast, and she looked in confusion.

The man quickly left and she had no idea what had happened. However, she did find her way to get out of inferis after meeting another demon hunter, whose name is unknown to her. As he led her out, it was clear what she had to do.  She then, through traveling, realized what she was, a demon hunter, and one which had devoted her life to helping others from these retched beings. But through this process, she lost all hope in a god. All religious faith emptied her mind. In her eyes, if there was a god, demons would surly not exist.  

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FACTION:
Four Blades

REAL-LIFE SKILLS:
- Extremely High Intelligence
- Gymnastic specialist
- quick reader
- great with radials
- she always tries to better herself.

INFERIS SKILLS:
- Extreme Speed
- Increased Dexterity
- Increased Agility
- Can sense the presence of Demonic Forces

WEAKNESSES:
- Will rarely admit to being wrong.
- second guesses herself.
- she suffers from immense depression, and often thinks of suicide.
- occasional mood swings.
- afraid of being touched by anyone, and freaks out when being touched.
- Physically Weak arms.
- She is very easy to manipulate.
- She is overly Trustworthy

COLOURS:
- English (Light Turquois)
- Spanish (Light Green)
- Demonic (red)

TRIVIA:

- She Loves Pop music
- She hates being Mean to people
- She is afraid of spiders
- She has never killed anyone, or anything, but she has incapacitated demons.  
- She believes there is no god.

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USER DETAILS

ALIAS:
Aloura

OTHER CHARACTERS:
- Paresse
- Sophia Avaro

ROLEPLAY HISTORY:
7 months

FACECLAIM:

Code:

[b]D-Grey Man[/b] :: [b]Lenalee Lee[/b]

CUSTOM RANK:
Emerald Cinderella

[Aloura Reglas]

bump for completion.

[Belial]

REVISE.

Lots of typos and grammatical errors, BUT, I will overlook that. Now here are the issues which some are SMALL as an ant, and others are as gaping as a whale, prolly.

1. Says your eyes change colors? Like why? I get the whole dye your hair get up, but the fact it leaves ambiguity leaves question to your eye almost never changing color bit. But that's a small issue that just requires an explanation.

2. So... she respects the Templar, but vents over the fact they are more popular than Demon Hunters based on... what proof exactly? I mean if you respect someone, why would you vulgarly dispute the fact they are more popular? And also given history, there is no mentions that she has met Templars anywhere, considering they are a secretive group, so how does she know about them to warrant a personality segment within that entry?

3. With your history, the inconsistency is that... how did you hear about the Templars? Which of the Four Blades rescued you from the demons in Inferis? AND, finally, you do realize you HAVE to join the Four Blades IC-wise right? Not from the background history. Also, why does she believe in no God when she is in Inferis, that proves just about every Biblical story about demonic entities that play mortals like toys true? Discrepancies best explained thus.

Address these issues and I'll take another look at your sheet.

[Aloura Reglas]

Flaws In your grading:
1) almost everyones eyes change color just a little bit when going into different light angles. This is what I was referring too and I was stating that her eyes were so dark that they rarely enter a light source that can change this.

2) I will get rid of the popularity thing, however, people do talk. In real life, I have never seen a god or satan, but people talk about them and that's pretty much how I know of them. She just over heard about them.

3) Has she ever met a god? No. She has no reasn to believe there is a god. Okay, so there are a demons, but if you ask me that is even more proof there is no god. She has never met an angle, and the fact that there are demons proves to her there is no god. If god was real (in her mind), he would not allow demons to exist. If he was all powerful as god was supposed to be, he would obliterate all demons from anywhere.

I will change everything else:)

[Aloura Reglas]

DOSSIER: DEMON HUNTER

 
”the demons of this world aren't in hell, they are in the souls of the corrupt”

BASIC DETAILS

NAME:
Aloura Reglas

AGE:
19

GENDER:
Female

NATIONALITY:
American (United States of America)

BIRTHPLACE:
Juarez, Mexico (both parents are American, it was bad timing.)

BIRTHDATE:
August/8/1993

PICTURE:

Spoiler:

*********

PERSONAL DETAILS

DESCRIPTION:
Aloura is a fairly average height for a girl of her age, standing high at 5 foot 6, 5 foot 8 with her shows on. She wears a long sleeved jacket which is zipped all the way to the top, and strapped at the top, covering her whole neck. Its a dark blue, almost black jacket which has a long white stripe around the sipper, aka the center, and on the shoulders of her jacket. The zipper is an inch wide circle with a white cross in the middle,  and is usually zipped to the top. The shoulders of the uniform are decorated with large white crosses, and a silver broach given to her by her mother rests over her heart. The jacket fills out her C-cupped breasts almost perfectly, getting almost skin tight. The jacket reaches down to the tips of Alouras fingers, with a thin white line running down the sleeve till it reaches the thick white trimming.

She wears a short  black skirt which only goes down to about 6 or 7 inches below the waist, and is trimmed with white. A blue back cover from her waist and goes about 10 or 11 inches down from the waist, and trails behind her as she runs. She wears long, black boots which start right above the knee, and are pure black.

Aloura's hair is constantly a different color. Due to a habit she developed just to piss off her parents when she was younger, she constantly dyes her hair, however, her hair is usually either black, dark green, or dark blue. It will never be a light color, or a red. She isn't a fan of the color red. She has dark, stunning blue eyes, which almost never change colors.

PERSONALITY:
Aloura is a fairly complex individual. She tries her hardest to over, or at least respect, everyone. Her superiors, even her equals are all treated with the up most respect. She has no opinions towards Templar and actually views them as good people who deserve just as much respect as Demon hunters.

She never cusses, except for the word Bastard which she only uses when overly enraged. However, she rarely gets to that point because when ever someone pokes fun at her, her low confidence kicks in and it causes her to lose hope in winning. However, when she has a team, she works better. She remembers how they rely on her, and she remembers that she must keep fighting for her friends and her team. Her friends are the most important thing to her, her mother and father being dead her friends are really the only people she has left.

She will usually try her hardest to stick away from violence, unless its with a demon. Contrary to her opinions towards fighting and battles, which are she hates them and tries to use words to avoid it, when facing a demon she knows that she must get over that fact, and go towards the opponent with full force.

Aloura is a very logical person, and knows when and where things must be done. this makes her very good at leading a group, especially when the opponent is far greater then she is. She tries to keep an up beat attitude, but with depression flowing through her body, it is hard for her to keep such an attitude. She will often lose her focus due to such a thing, and consider suicide. However, again, she thinks of all the people she will be letting down in order to keep going. She will use the thoughts of those who have died before, and she knows it would be a disgrace to not only her family, but demons hunters everywhere if she died by her own hand.

HISTORY:
As Aloura was born, it would be very hard for anyone to dispute that her life was anything but perfect. Her family was the richest, almost in the world. Her father being a quite good business man, and her mother being a big time lawyer, she was happy. Aloura went to school, and she even skipped 3rd and fourth grade. At the age of 16 she was in collage. However. the sad fact of life is that it didn't last. Through out all of school, she had very little friends due to her being younger then anyone. This brought to a bit of depression, but it was very manageable and she kept it to her self. However, when Aloura was 16, barely done with her first year of collage, it happened. She came home from the weekend and almost broke down crying. There was a man over her parents bodies, not only with there blood on his clothing, but there limbs in his mouth. As she screamed in shock she tried to get away, throwing what ever she could towards the beast. Running away, she thought was a good idea, she tripped. As she looked up, it happened. it slowly hit her. thoughts of suicide filled her head. "I would rather kill my self then be killed by this thing..." she muttered to herself, then she heard it. The subtle sound of a body hitting the ground. Opening her eyes, she realized the man was on the ground. She looked around, and she saw an image walking away.

To this day she didn't know who it was that saved her, however, with three dead bodies she knew enough to know that she would be blamed for the murders. She backed a tiny back pack and left the whole life she knew behind. She had her fathers credit card in one pocket, and her mothers broach in another. She didn't dare put it on yet. However, she then realized what had happened that day. As she was walking around, staying in a near by hotel. It was only a few days later and she was still in depression. She punched the mirror in front of her and lifted the glass to her wrist. She told her self how useless she was, and right as she plunged it down, something happened. As she dropped the glass, she realized she was no longer in
the back room with the broken mirror. As she looked around, she saw something. Demons. It then hit her. A demon was what killed her parents. She didn't want to, but she let out a scream of shear terror as the demons spotted. "Not again." she screamed to herself as she continued running. She then saw it happen all over again. Someone came down, and killed the demon. As she turned around, she saw what had happened. A man had killed the giant beast, and she looked in confusion.

The man quickly left and she had no idea what had happened. However, she did find her way to get out of inferis after meeting another demon hunter, whose name is unknown to her. As he led her out, it was clear what she had to do.  She then became a demon hunter, and devoted her life to helping others from these retched beings. But through this process, she lost all hope in a god. All religious faith emptied her mind. In her eyes, if there was a god, demons would surly not exist.  

*********

FACTION:
Four Blades

REAL-LIFE SKILLS:
- Extremely High Intelligence
- Gymnastic specialist
- quick reader
- great with radials
- she always tries to better herself.

INFERIS SKILLS:
- Extreme Speed
- Increased Dexterity
- Increased Agility
- Can sense the presence of Demonic Forces

WEAKNESSES:
- Will rarely admit to being wrong.
- second guesses herself.
- she suffers from immense depression, and often thinks of suicide.
- occasional mood swings.
- afraid of being touched by anyone.
- freaks out when being touched.
- Physically Weak arms.
- She is very easy to manipulate.

COLOURS:
- English (Light Turquois)
- Spanish (Light Green)
- Demonic (red)

TRIVIA:

- She Loves Pop music
- She hates being Mean to people
- She is afraid of spiders
- She has never killed anyone, or anything, but she has incapacitated demons.  
- She believes there is no god.

*********

USER DETAILS

ALIAS:
Aloura

OTHER CHARACTERS:
- Paresse
- Sophia Avaro

ROLEPLAY HISTORY:
7 months

FACECLAIM:

Code:

[b]D-Grey Man[/b] :: [b]Lenalee Lee[/b]

CUSTOM RANK:
Emerald Cinderella

[Lazarus Carter]

REVISE

1] History:

She then became a demon hunter,

You don't "become" a Demon Hunter. It's a genealogical origin. It stays with you from the day you're born til the day you die. Maybe she actively starts addressing her heritage, but she wouldn't just "become" one.

2] Weaknesses:

- afraid of being touched by anyone.
- freaks out when being touched.

These two are identical...

3] Birthdate: 8th August 1993 makes her 18, because IC site date is February 2012.

[Aloura Reglas]

edits made :)

[Lazarus Carter]

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