Iron Fist Evocation

[Ace Vincent]

DOSSIER: EVOCATIONS


“I enjoy kicking ass, and chewing gum, and I am all out of gum.”

NAME:
Iron Fist

LEVEL:
Level 1

CATEGORY:
Skill

TYPE:
Iron Manipulation

IMAGE:

Spoiler:

OVERVIEW:
Iron Fist: The user channels energy to his fists causing the molecules in his fist to  harden, and compress them into Iron, the user then uses his Iron fists to cause more melee damage whilst in battle. A sigil forms below the left eye, a four leafed clover tattoo. Depending how bad the user is beat up determines the number of leaves the clover has, say your in perfect health you would have 4 leaves and shitty health only 1 leaves. Each leave represent 25% of his full health, so the leaves are a helpful tracker of how much damage he takes. The attack damage that can be inflicted with this evocation is a force somewhat like being hit by a Sledge hammer.

[Lazarus Carter]

REVISE

1] Any further clarification on the "leaves" system? Does it run on percentage? Does the clover represent how much energy he has left, how much damage he's dealing, or how much damage he can take? Just a little addition would be helpful. ^_^

Some more detail on the iron fists themselves would be great, too, but it's not necessary.

[Ace Vincent]

Alright, I explained the tattoo more. To clarify it is only a symbol of how much health he has left.

Edited

[Lazarus Carter]

REVISE

I'd say dial back the power a little. Drop it to maybe... the force of a sledgehammer with each punch; cause otherwise that'd be superhuman strength AND iron manipulation, which are different abilities in themselves.

[Ace Vincent]

Alright I dialed it back like you said to. I really wasn't too sure how strong to make it, so I guessed knowing someone would correct me. lol. Edited

[Lazarus Carter]

APPROVED

No worries - trial and error is a great way of doing things! Lets you learn your limits. Now get Ace into the game!

[Ace Vincent]

Alright time to figure out where to start, lol.

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